9.6.08

Dis

I just... I just don't know why this girl is so bad. Like, maybe I shouldn't be critiquing someone else's work when I'm not even close to being an established writer but... her pieces are awful. Redundant. Cluttered. Lacking flow/much sense. Here's a link to all the stuff she published this year.

I feel bad. But it makes me want to write even more and especially to write well, so I'm going to find within me an entry for tomorrow.

1 comment:

John said...

you're right, she's pretty awful. also, she disses philly for rushing japanther's shit. hello, that's how it's supposed to be done.